publication?

This past week I received a letter from Cricket Magazine asking me to rework an article and resubmit it. After getting many, many reject letters, I had given up hope of writing for children, but for the past two days I have been parked in front of the computer ripping out paragraphs, researching, and flipping through the thesaurus to find comparable words for treasure and beach. Please send a little prayer my way that the perfect words simply flow onto the page!